Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university.
Most people agree that deciding the major that they want to study in univesity, is one of the most important choises that they make, since it will decide what kind of job that they will have in the future. Personally, I believe that it is much better if students have at least a time ditsnce of one year between their high school and university. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, getting a university will at least take four years and it is important to make a plan how to use this time. In othe words is higher education is the best choice or is it better to spend this time on learning new skills. A one year time can give us time to think about such issues. My personal experince is a compelling illustration of this. A few years ago whan I graduated highshool I immediatly went to universty as an mechanical engineering student. It was only after a year that I realiesed that this major does not suit me and I what I relly liked was barbery. I had no time to think about what job I truly want to have since I was busy whit my studies in last year of highschool. Had I not gone to university right after highschool I would not have wasted a year of my life.
Furthermore, in choosing a university major, it is important to know what kind of job it will lead to, ans the best method for getting familiar to a particular job is to have that job. For instance when my brother was intrested in becoming a mechanical engineer and work in a factory. The problem was that he had no idea how working in a factory was like, so after graduating highschools he started to work in a factory. Of course not as an egineer, but this experience thaught him wat he wanted to learn. He realized that working in a factory was not what he had thought. So he chose civil engineering.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that it is necessary to have a year between highschool and university . Thats because it gives young people time to realize what their true intrests are, and they can aquire experience about their future job and then make a better choice based on that experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35516372796 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56825833199 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48362720403 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9542087732 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176259976697 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545127288946 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607489336973 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106449929946 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578386188652 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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