Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history is a kind of the essential title in every society, and it has a profound influence on people and on the government. I firmly believe that, taking history courses in universities plays a crucial role in every society, thanks to the understanding cultures and using prior experiences, and the government should provide adequate funding for history classes. This essay is going to explain these two items.
Firstly, it goes without saying that knowing history has a great impact on society because of culture, knowing the history is the best way to understand the most important title, culture, which can help us to communicate among people all around the world. Ritual, local food, dresses, dance, historical places, ceremonies and rules are related to the culture, so we can have a little background of every country based on their culture. we can connect with other countries if we know their dictionary, connection can help us to amend. For instance, we have had communication with china, and a strong bond has been figured between my mother country and china recently. china and us, are similar in some ceremonies, local food, restrict rules and sort of things. As a result, we can import or export some materials with them, and help each other to show our culture.
Secondly, the governments were profoundly affected by history. Actually, some politicians like Napoleon Bonaparte, hitler, Gondi and Shah Abbas, and someone like these were successful because they had a great function in wars, in economies or in performing rules. Therefore, by using their strategies, the governments can become successful, and have a better function in different situations. Besides, some politicians made mistakes in the past which the governments can use those experiences, and avoid doing wrong things that happened at that time. For example, the German's government adopt some hitler's strategies in their military operation to become win in possible wars. those histories help them to become one of the powerful pole in the world.
Although, some people believe that, it is not necessary to take history courses in universities, in my point of view, taking history classes is as essential as other classes, and each of the university students should take it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18528610354 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76146712605 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561307901907 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7291209641 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136201505582 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041859792108 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489181711266 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100418367808 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052965718693 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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