Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People may be buried in deep thought when they initially see the point that all university should be required to take history courses. Some people argue that it is necessary for the students no matter what their field study is to learn history courses. However, others believe that you cannot ask all the students to learn the course that they are not interested in. I, personally, incline to the former opinion. There are some reasons can be back up.
To begin with, as a old Chinese saying goes, one can be a man with a good standing by learning history. Leaning is the major work for students without any doubt. Granted, it is important for university students to master the skill and absorb knowledge which particularly beneficial for their career and help them to find a decent job after graduation, but it is equally essential for the students to learn history courses as to how to be a man who can be a constructive resource for the society and his country. In this sense, learning history courses will shape their mind, in a more general way, to know what kind of man should be as being considered a small part of the world.
Second, History courses can help students to know more about the identity of him or herself, along with how to understand the relationship between the individual and the country and whether we should love our country or not. Building a sense of loving own country is quite necessary for university students. After graduation, most of them will go to the society to work, to serve the country. With knowing the history of the country, it is more clear for students to decide what kind of work they should do. For example, Jim, one of my friend, was majoring in mathematics, who determined to work as a translator. After learning the history, he realized that many western media have been reporting the fake news to despise China for a long time, which let many people have a wrong view of China, it is impede the development of China to some extent. That is why he wanted to be a translator to put real China on the website for letting the foreigners know what is the truth.
Third, students can build up a better analytical approach by taking history courses not only help them to get things straight but also help them avoid brainwashing. The world is not that beautiful and fair to someone's eyes. Especially for the adult world. In history courses, we can know the reason behind some big historical events, such as World war I and II. That would make you think and analyze the truth of those powerful countries. At least, you will not buy those propaganda and so-called values as those countries selling to the whole world. It's quite important for the university to stay calm and stay clear.
To sum up, the world has become quite different now, many people can be confused and lost their direction up to their life destination. History can let us know what is the right thing to do and what should not be done, which is the light house for the university students. Therefore, I strongly agree with the statement that all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: help them find
...cularly beneficial for their career and help them to find a decent job after graduation, but it i...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'impeded'.
Suggestion: impeded
...eople have a wrong view of China, it is impede the development of China to some extent...
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Message: Did you mean 'this propaganda' or 'those propagandas'?
Suggestion: this propaganda; those propagandas
...l countries. At least, you will not buy those propaganda and so-called values as those countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, as to, at least, for example, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2605.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63523131673 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48151497404 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483985765125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7303324146 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.192307692 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317325591714 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925703796252 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12461291574 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216102395024 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127304942859 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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