Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advancements in technology as well as more urbanism, have made our lives much more modern, complex and faster than what it was before. In order to keep up with the growing speed of the world, we need to have advanced organizational skills. For this, I have two main reasons which I am going to point out through this essay.
First, due to the enormous number of tasks that we have to do throughout a day, we are always lacking time. For example, a normal day for me contains juggling into work, doing the household chores, go grocery shopping, studying french and preparing lunch for the following day, which leaves me almost no room for having leisure. With having detailed planning for each of my days, I would be able to manage all these tasks, and have some spare time for my hobbies, for example by listening to podcasts while I'm cooking or read my favorite book on the way back home.
Also, the fast speed of the growth in technology has made a world for us, the new generation a much more competitive place especially in the terms of occupations. We are required to do more and more during a short amount of time with high quality. The only way to accomplish this is by organizing all the tasks that we require to do during each working day and leaving some time slots open for unexpected tasks that could occur. Otherwise, we are not going to be able to fulfill what we are required to and, consequently, we may be in danger of losing our job.
All in all, we are living in a busy, fast-paced environment, with a lot of tasks and duties which we need to accomplish. The most practical skill that can help survive is planning and organizational skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... example by listening to podcasts while Im cooking or read my favorite book on the...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...rganizing all the tasks that we require to do during each working day and leaving som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, may, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52649006623 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56016802782 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7652126378 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150353410288 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559581353086 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354741709435 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909025623017 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511200731253 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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