Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Happiness, the thing most people strive for, have been valued and triggers heated discussions over whether people now are less happy and satisfied with their lives than in the past due to the rapidly changing world. This developement of world, in some people's view, makes people feel gratified. On the contrary, my perspective is that people nowadays are less delightful than decades ago.
To begin with, never should we ignore that the rapid development of technology makes contempory adults feel more exhausted compared with those in the past. First, the fast updating knowledge forces people to learn new things continuously. To be more specific, in order to hunt for a career, students have to obtain more expertise and simultaneously learn how to apply the knowledge they have just learned to practice. For example, with the advent of computer, people in many fields are required to learn basic computer knowledge in order to manipulate the machine or use professional software to boost their work efficiency. This urges people to allocate more time to studying than before, makeing people feel tired and less happy. Besides, the new technology also makes employees feel pressure because one day they may be replaced by the machines. For instance, the autonomous driving technology has become more and more mature maybe replace most drivers. In such circumstances, people may suffer from pressure since they are likely to lose their jobs. However, people in the past don't have such feels because human labor is necessary.
In addition, the development of the society also increase people's desire to higher lifequality. In detail, nowadays people will not feel satisfied if they just not hungary. Instead, they want to enjoy more colorful and convenient life than before. For example, not only adults today may work hard to earn money to give himself a better life such as living in big house, eating delicious food, go travelling on weekends, they also tend to try their best to provide their parents with constant medical care and give their parents access to well-rounded education. Obviously, modern people desire more in materials and mental than those in decades ago. As a result, current people are less likely to feel satisfied and thus find it laborious to fullfill their requirements.
In conclusion, people are definitely less happy and satisfied than before due to the fast developing technology as well as the growing desire of modern people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1775 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61862440033 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5475 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1040618224 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296018220529 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101038377145 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770234428216 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215302231206 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844784755685 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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