Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That human's life is short many people try to enjoy of their life as much as possible. The speed of world's development causes to appear new facilities and hobbies that never had been in the past. As a result, some individual claim human is very glad nowadays, on contrary, others do not think so. In my view, the second group are right. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, entering technologies, gadgets, games, etc. in our life is not avoidable. Each day, we are witness of creating new ones which some of them have critical role in our society. Thus, it is advisable people prompt for having them. But is it worse really having such things by working so hard and getting sever stress? I will exemplify my point with a true story about something that happened to me. 5 years ago, my husband and I decided to buy an air-conditioner instead of cooler. We forced to work severely until midnight and even weekends for 6 mounts in cost of loosing happy times and getting terrible headaches. Had not we exchange our cooling system, we could have been healthier now!
In grace of new technology, communication with each other is very easier than past. For example, I can speak with my friends through the world by a click of fingers in a few seconds. In addition, we can follow the life events of many desired celebrities and unconsciously compare our life with them. How they spend their time and where they travel. By comparison our conditions with them, we may feel unpleasant. However, in the past we enjoyed our real life. As I remember, my grand father was very glad for having a little and nifty farm.
Last but not least, for having better compatibility with fast changes in world, we should be both up-date and aware of the events that are happening around us. Unless, we will feel disappointed and sad. For instance, my mother can not use computer and internet, so, when we talk about them she has not any thing to speak and feel alone. But in the past family members had more common matters to share with each other.
In all, what drives somebody to suggest that speed of world's development effects on people's positive emotions may fall into 3 main categories including unavoidable technologies, easy communication among people and not having enough ability to get huge amount of information for different persons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
That humans life is short many people try to enjoy ...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'appearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: appearing
... The speed of worlds development causes to appear new facilities and hobbies that never h...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ult, some individual claim human is very glad nowadays, on contrary, others do no...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...onditioner instead of cooler. We forced to work severely until midnight and even weeken...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...so, when we talk about them she has not any thing to speak and feel alone. But in the pas...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of information for different persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7242206235 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57049061 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599520383693 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2193175907 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.68 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154166668399 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400699155021 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302915771806 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906542476535 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238704991503 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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