Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
today, our world is changing so rapidly, that we can hardly follow the changes. However, in my point of view, people enjoy their life now more than in the past. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, technology is improving very quickly, which help people be more convenient and more satisfied. there are a lot of newly developed devices, which help us save energy and time. As a result, we get less exhausted and have much leisure time. The example of washing machine demonstrates this reality well. In the past, people used to wash their dishes by hands, in a comparatively time-consuming process. On the contrary, today we can put all the dirty dishes in the washing machine and leave it to its own. it will not makes us tired or takes long, and we are able to perform multiple interesting activities such as dancing, listening to music, and reading book in our free time.
Moreover, medical science reaches new achievements everyday, which help people to be healthier and happier. Sick people, physically or mentally, cannot be truly happy or fulfilled because of the pains they have. they are always suffering and cannot think about anything but their illness. there are a lot of diseases which could not be cured in the past and caused a lot of inconveniences for many people. For example, five years ago, when I was at my dorm room, I started to feel really bad. my stomach was unbelievably painful and I could not even move. my roommates brought me to the hospital and the doctors told us it was because of my appendicitis. For some hours I was just screaming, and could not think about anything but death. Afterwards, I had it under surgery and I felt amazing after a few days. If something like this had happened to someone ,two hundred years ago, they would have never survived.
In conclusion, I firmly believe, that today, people are happier and move convenient due to the rapid improvements. this is because they take advantage of the new technologies and medical achievements like never before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76880222841 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65872147858 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58495821727 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2930201179 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156260923214 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412519959163 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047526142967 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101583304183 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640056625829 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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