Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are several choices available while traveling to another region, especially a foreign country regarding the way in which people can travel. From traveling solo and unassisted to travelling in a group along with a tour guide there is a variety of options to choose from. But I think that traveling with a tour guide has its own benefits which sometimes outweigh those provided by the other options. First and foremost, whether travelling with your family or travelling alone a person needs a solid plan or even just a general outline of the entire trip so as to use the limited time most efficiently to visit as many locations as possible and to gain a variety of novel but unique experiences all while managing the limited time and travel budget. This is where a tour guide becomes important. Travelling when accompanied by a guide not only saves time and energy while sight-seeing but also gives a structure to the trip and also gives the opportunity to know about some handy or historical information from the tour guide. This is true because in most cases the tour guide is a well experienced person who knows just which places are the best option and what historically or aesthetically relevant sites will the travelers most enjoy. Thus, accompanied travel can make sure that people, who might not get another chance at visiting a particular country again get to know about the most notable monuments, traditions, cuisine and sight-seeing at an affordable and efficient price. Further, spending a vacation in a different place means that people usually do not know what is the best for them and there is also a possibility that they might get swindled or tricked by professional fraudsters or thieves. Thus, there is a factor of worrying while travelling without guidance. People sometimes tend to save money by travelling on their own but lose much more than they could have possibly saved when they face the unknown and unforgiving elements from weather phenomenon, criminal associations and such factors which they do not take into account. Moreover, a person generally travels to a foreign country or even within the country for enjoyment and relaxation and thus, recharge themselves before going back to their daily routines. So, it is better for a person to travel with a tourist company's local guide so that they can keep the worries away and absorb the true essence and flavor of the place which they are visiting. Planning a safe and affordable trip within a limited time slot so as to fit within a number of available holidays is a daunting task and requires constant attention towards the surroundings, especially when travelling with one's family or if older aged people are the ones who going to travel. Therefore, paying a fee to a travel agency which includes the entire travel package is much more simple and efficient. Lastly, travelling agencies also offer discounts on their packages which at times are cheaper than the expenditure of unassisted travel. To conclude, I think that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, i think, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89615384615 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6920082251 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6808827684 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.764705882 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5882352941 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208885430302 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085809261463 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653813293944 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208885430302 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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