Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with the notion that the distant relatives are less important today. I believe that the family members who are not immediate relatives still play a crucial role in a person's life, though it is true that in many families they have been separated by distance more than that in the past. But this does not mean that their contribution to an individual's life has changed. First and foremost, the extended family is bound together by ancestral ties and cannot be separated very easily as they actively play a role in each others lives regularly or occasionally, if not on a daily basis. For instance, people tend to visit each other or their native place on a festival as festivals are meant for the purpose of bringing people together every now and then. I personally visit my uncle and my grandparents on every major festival in a year as they are the ones who took care of me when I was a baby and played a part in my life as I grew up. Thus, they are as important to me as my parents if not more. Secondly, it is crucial for a person to be surrounded by their family members on a regular basis to have a positive effect on their mood, social interaction and life itself. Sharing with each other the important moments that occurred during the periods when they did not meet is a great experience for both parties as they get an opportunity to catch up with each other and lead to a boost in everyone's energy to move forward in the journey of life. It can be seen as a situation where a person gets their emotional battery charged with positivity and the care and love of their close ones. For example, whenever my grandmother visits her village, which is her birthplace, she gets overly energetic and feels much better than she feels regularly when living with me and my family in the city. On the one hand, she feels bored of living in the congested apartment in the city spending most of her days inside the apartment doing banal tasks and on the other hand, she gets excited and charged with positivity when she knows that it is now that time of the year when she would get to visit her childhood neighbors and distant family which took care of her during her harsh childhood. This highlights how important it is still today to keep in touch with the distant relatives. Thirdly, it is as important for a person to maintain contact with their extended family as it is to meet new people. This is because they are the ones who truly care about you and are more likely to support you in your times of need. Therefore, interacting with them and being present for them is necessary for living a satisfactory life. Further, there is a case where one of my dad's friend's father-in-law willingly gifted a city apartment to his son-in-law out of love and respect which the man showed towards them by accepting and caring them as if they were his own parents, besides proving to be a great husband to his wife. Therefore, it will not be wrong to say that distant relatives are a important part of our lives even today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...elatives still play a crucial role in a persons life, though it is true that in many fa...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... not mean that their contribution to an individuals life has changed. First and foremost, t...
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Line 1, column 743, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...the purpose of bringing people together every now and then. I personally visit my uncle and my gra...
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Line 1, column 1828, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...in the city. On the one hand, she feels bored of living in the congested apartment in th...
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Line 1, column 2979, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...wrong to say that distant relatives are a important part of our lives even today....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46112115732 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46985957859 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457504520796 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0122712965 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.055555556 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7222222222 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141958022079 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526057278231 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426624888862 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141958022079 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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