Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying in today’s progressive world where we live, due to the increasing problems, most of the people are exposed to anxiety conditions. Therefore, they need the ways to reveal their stress and take the chance to can have fun for a while. In order to get rid of some stress , they choose to trave.
It has been a debate among psychologist that, travelling in the group with tour guide is the best option to can reduce their worries instead of lonely trip. So, I hold the view that, going on trip by tour guide is the good approach to handle this situation. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there is no secret to anyone that, the most crucial key on trip, is acquiring the special sites. Whenever you decide to travel, you investigated in the internet about the most important of location and sometimes you can not exactly find the mystery and suprising sites. But if you travel with tour guide , they can lead you on the good way. According to their experience, the leader can take you to the most amazing place where the local people just aware of them so as a foreigner you do not have chance to find it without leader. For instance, last year, I went to travel to shiraz in a group lead. The leader took us to the small pool where known as a wishes pool. It seems that, you can put the coin to the pool and make a wish so your dreams will came true after a while. As a surprisingly , Nobody except local people and tour guides haven’t ever seen there. Under such circumastances, I was very lucky to visit there.
Furthermore, in the group trip, you have chance to make a friend. So, it makes the opportunity to communicate with different people and being together for your rest of your life. For example, In my group travel last year, I met a guy who have in common lot with each other and spend the time after a trip. Hopefully, we will married next month and it is the advantages of travelling in group lead.
In conclusion, having considered the above-mentioned reasons into account, I am of the opinion that, travelling in a group have some beneficials instead of without. Leading you by a guider can create your travel as a best memory due to the experience of unknown places. Also, you can acquire with others people in the group whom will being as your best friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4965034965 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50118177658 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3610781138 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6818181818 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274101855334 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835641069076 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675232977434 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156138630936 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732716438595 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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