Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People usually like to go on a trip in their leisure time and depend on their beliefs, the way of journey, and the destination may change from person to person. For instance, someone goes on a religious trip because of his/her religious background and someone else like to see, for example, artificial/ historical areas according to his/her own experience. There are also some internal and external factors that your travel get influenced by them. Besides, some facilities help you to have a memorable trip. However, I firmly believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide, and I have some reasons to support my idea.
First of all, I think by traveling in a group which is led by a tour guide you could have a good and safe trip because a tour guide usually is familiar with destination’ area, natives, spectacle landscapes, probable perilous and the so forth. So if any possible problem happens, a tour guide presence would make you more convenience about the issue. Take my friend, Saeed, for instance. He had a forest trip to the area in the north of Iran. After midnight he left the camp to walk around and smoke, but because of darkness, he suddenly falls into a well, and his left leg had broken. After several hours his spouse had talked to the tour guide about her husband's left and her concerns about this issue. After some hours searching, they could find Saeed with the help of aboriginal friends of the tour guide.
Moreover, there are many myths and mysterious stories behind historical and artificial works that a tour guide could give an understandable explanation about them and reveals their secret to you. I used to travel alone, but three years ago, my friend, Lisa, called me on a group trip to China. Despite my intention, I accepted her offer and went on this fantastic trip. We had a perfect tour leader that uncovered some wired secret to us about soldiers buried in china’s big wall, Red Dragon myth, and the forth. It was a fantastic experience. Also, a made some cool friends. However, I should acknowledge that a group traveling maybe somehow annoying because sometimes other members disrupt your focus and interfere with something which is completely individual.
In a nutshell, I believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. First of all, a tour guide could be helpful. Moreover, a tour guide could make your trip much more memorable and exciting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...left and her concerns about this issue. After some hours searching, they could find S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75175644028 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61020657714 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515222482436 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8761306501 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2272727273 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223797596749 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706440189711 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096069348007 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155800904186 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456568747915 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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