Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without any doubt, travel could be a very delightful way to escape from the tedium of daily life. People normally, need to take a break from their jobs for even, several days and traveling helps them to relax and feel free. In my opinion, the best choice of traveling is to be in a group with a tour guide and I hold my perspective for the two following reasons:
To begin with, one of the most important purposes of travel is being relaxed and get free from any anxiety. As a matter of fact, traveling, lonely, could bring about many difficulties and stresses, particularly, international travel will be more complicated because of lacking sufficient information related to the destination. In addition, being in a group with a tour guide can help you to use your trip more effectively, without any waste of time for finding unfamiliar places. My own experience is a compelling example of what I mean. Two years ago, I had traveled to Turkey, a country full of historical monuments. Of course, if I were alone without any guidance from my tour leader, I'd not have the chance of visiting a variety of the most significant monumental places. Istanbul, the capital of Turkey, is located in the most astonishing part of the world with too many attractive places for visitors. Considering someone who intends to visit these places, with an inadequate amount of time, it could be very difficult to manage their time by themselves. The tour guide helped me to use my five days of visiting, perfectly, which made me a marvelous memory.
Moreover, joining a group for travel will be a great opportunity for making new friends, who have a similar affection for traveling and you can develop your new friendship by traveling to other places together. For instance, I found one of my best friends in domestic travel within a cool group. She also accompanied me on other trips which were a pleasure for me. I will, definitely, go on other trips with her in the future.
To recap, I firmly, believe that the best way of traveling is with a group and a tour guide as well. A tour guide is very helpful for using the time of the travel more lucrative and effective. Furthermore, traveling with a group provide the chance of finding new friends for the rest of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, i mean, in addition, of course, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68261964736 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74195446889 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51637279597 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6831784007 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.277777778 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246059557035 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875887528191 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785224291597 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181453573775 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620943595942 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.