Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to follow strict rules set by their parents. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Upbringing is a major challenge and learning experience for both parents and children. In order to instill good values and bring up a responsible human being parents tend to set up certain rules, which often are considered as a restriction to freedom by the youth of today’s generation. Some people believe that parents should be lenient with their kids whereas others believe strict will only help in disciplining children. Nevertheless, I agree with the argument that children should be required to follow rules set by their parents for the reasons elucidated below.
Firstly, our parents have come into the world much earlier than us and therefore have more relevant experiences regarding many issues which children have not even touched upon. To illustrate, many parents tell their children to come home early and be careful when they go for excursions and trips. Initially, to the child, this sounds like parents are restricting their freedom by not allowing them to enjoy their social life like their friends. But, the underlying reason is their concern as they read about many fatalities like accidents at late night or at hiking spots. At this tender age children are carefree and thus the fear of our parents is justified as a small careless mistake can sometimes even cost their child’s life.
Secondly, during a person’s teenage years, people experience many hormonal changes and are not able to distinguish between right and wrong. They spend more time in college or enjoying life with their friends, that many times the younger generation have more faith in their friends than their family members. At this stage, quite a few friends remain in touch with you just for their own selfish reasons and cannot be identified by the young teenagers. But, as your parents have already gone through this phase of life, they can better identify your fake friends as compared to you. Therefore, in the long run these troublesome rules will benefit children.
Nevertheless, when we look at the other side of the coin, if there are too many restrictions imposed on children, it is natural for them to start moving away from their parents. In order to prevent such rebellious actions, parents should definitely have a set of rules for their child but before implementing any rule, they should discuss it with the child as well. The kid should be explained from childhood as to why they are setting up a particular rule and how it is designed for the child’s own good. If the child is taken into confidence and is made to understand, he or she will definitely accept it for his/her own well-being.
To summarize, a set of rules are definitely required to ensure that a child learns good morals and becomes a responsible and disciplined family member. Our elder’s experiences are the basis for these rules as they have faced similar situations when they were becoming adults. But, at the same time, the happiness quotient of children should also be taken into account so that the essence of enforcing these rules does not backfire.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...nging is a major challenge and learning experience for both parents and children. In order...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2543.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9862745098 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58342169734 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5612665616 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.095238095 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229642284021 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796296996145 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749294379371 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142663117787 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645865165672 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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