Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving transportation is the best way for governments to promote economic growth. Use specific reasons and example.
There are diverse ways to increase the economic growth and i believe transportation is one of them, its not it is the only one factor but yes proper trasportation can lead to more chances for economic growth which are explained in below paragraphs.
To begin with , first we should understand how the economic growth increases? I believe by more exchange of money, so this happens when there is exchange of goods and people, in and out of city, For that I really feel better transport is responsible.We can see the lucid change in services shops provide us, as we demand for anything they provide us within minimal time and this is because of fast supply and reason is better transportation. Whereas old time when there was no proper transportation people, shops, companies take enormous time and have to order the things so early to get on required time because of inconvienece of proper transportation.Raw material take time, labours take time and this is how all day get consumed in these things and if the product is ready that will take time to deliever. Now things has changed alot exchange of market is increasing alot and lead to good rise in market. The other benifit for economic growth because of transport is now transportation is available in night also.
To carry on economic growth can also be raised by traveeller in city which I feel somehow indirectly transport is responsible. Lets see it in this way from earlier no country and city was not developed and had not as such economy as we have now. The reason behind this is earlier people stays in their own country only, they do not travel but now we can see that people travel a lot , infact student travel to different countries for higher studies and I feel this had become possible because of transport facilities . What would we have done if their were no airplane , obvioulsy we remain in our country only and no experience and no economic growth. If we look at the same example on small level then the best example of transport and economic growth is rural and urban areas. In recent years government helped rural to connect urban by making roads, and providing facilities to travel and the results are really amazing people of rural area are no learning, they come to city to study and even for shopping and I believe in upcoming years these rural areas also changes to urban because of these facilities and which is good indication of economic growth.
To sum up I believe that there are many developing advantage of good transport and that can lead to growth of city, economic, health and many things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, then, whereas, i feel, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73614190687 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6418240653 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472283813747 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.362038376 48.9658058833 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.307692308 100.406767564 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6923076923 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191890409257 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841349884265 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608292408071 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118090567071 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420989908521 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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