Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.
Nowadays, education has become an important part of our society because education links almost every part of the society. Everyone that is dedicated to one section is required to get a degree from school. Under such a premise, a number of people argue that improving school is the most important factor for the successful development of a country. However, from my perspective, I hold the opinion that there are other aspects of a country that share the same importance with the improving schools this standard is too simple and there are other factors like economy and culture that matter as well.
It must be acknowledged that the development of schools do reflect the development of the society. Schools, which means education, provide most of the talents for a country who are the major force in the construction of a country. The education level of them has a direct influence on a country’s future. That is to say, if a country is well developed, its education tends to be successfully improved as well. Nevertheless, a greatly developed education alone is not eligible to measure the development of a country.
The economy, which is closed related to nations of a country, compared to education, also accounts for a large proportion of the development of a country. As is known to us, the economy is the foundation of a country. Almost all sections of a country have the traces of economy, including education. For instance, the construction of schools need money, as well as their expenses. Besides, we also need money to attend schools. If the economy is grows, it will bring rise to the education. Schools will obtain more expenses to put in researches and people will be able to afford the tuition to attend university and finish their degrees. These are all representations of the thrive of a country.
Culture also play an important role in the development of a country. If a country is poor in culture, it is incapable to be treated as a successfully developed country because we cannot see its characteristics. For example, China is a country rich in culture. It has a number of festivals like spring festivals and mid-autumn festivals which are famous all over the world. People in China are enjoyed with their own culture. That is the symbol of development.
With reasons I mentioned above, I can safely draw the conclusion that improving schools is not the most important factor for the successful development of a country because of the complexity of a country and the importance of economy and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92757009346 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.963105999 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439252336449 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3804392864 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352427171706 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917904980868 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104047315916 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234309437668 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115933564374 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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