Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
To begin with, being aware of many academic subjects helps us communicate with more people and improves communication skills. People who want to have a broad knowledge of various subjects have to communicate with more academic persons for sharing ideas and discussing subjects, and it gives them a chance for enhancing communication skills. For example, when my cousin was a freshman on campus, he was an isolated boy, who had no friends, but when he started to study in different fields and got more information. Then, he had to communicate with more people and had more opportunities for speaking with others. So, his communication skills were enhanced. Had he not have information in many subjects, he can not have enhanced his own communication skills.
Secondly, thanks to awareness about different subjects, people have more chances of finding jobs. Today, most of the companies and firms are searching for staff who have knowledge about broad areas and they can work rather than two staff because most workplaces are small and they do not have enough space for a lot of employees. Then, for getting more job opportunities, it is necessary that we have vast knowledge in different fields. To put in a more vivid picture, a friend of mine simultaneously studied in two fields, physics and computer engineering. When he was graduated, he saw a job opportunity on the internet that needed a person who had information on physics and computers. Then, he applied for this job and now he is a successful person among his peers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98828125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92396054831 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2017320913 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1508494237 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599464479564 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666124725144 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118887880949 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035120565637 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98828125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92396054831 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2017320913 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1508494237 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599464479564 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666124725144 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118887880949 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035120565637 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.