Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
It goes without saying that in this depressive and stressful world where we live, people are struggling with various problems and need traveling for releasing their stress. While some people believe that traveling in a group that led by a tour guide would be a great idea, others have an opposite view. Personally speaking, I agree with the former group. To substantiate my point of view, two significant reasons are being explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, traveling by a group that led by a tour guide provides people with a chance to spend less money in comparison traveling by themselves. Some tours buy tickets and reserve hotels in advance and receive a special discount. In the circumstance, economically, traveling by tour would be more beneficial for people. For example, last year I and my friend wanted to go to Istanbul by ourselves, a city in Turkey. So, we evaluate the cost of the journey and results extremely surprised us so that we wanted to give up this trip. After days, we became familiar with a tour that provided us with an affordable trip. Therefore, we traveled by this tour and had much more enjoyable times.
Secondly, By traveling with a tour, people have plans scheduled in advance by a tour leader and do not need to worry about which of places they should visit in a limited time of their journey. Some historical places or other touristy places have specific times and plans and will close after these times. Most of the people do not about these times and plans, then if they travel by themselves, they may lose these plans. For instance, my father is a merchant. He tells me about his last trip to India. Actually, he had gone to India for his job but he had a limited amount of time to visit one of the touristy places of India when he had accomplished his work. He decided to visit a temple but when he had reached this place it had closed, and he had seen a city tour that it finished its visit before the temple had closed and knew about the temple's work hours.
In conclusion, taking two above-mentioned reasons into account, I firmly believe that traveling in a group led by a tour guide would be definitely better for people. By traveling with a tour, not only can people reduce the cost of their trips but also have plans scheduled in advance by a tour leader. (39 min)
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59712230216 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55477970554 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494004796163 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0003779275 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248148526874 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813169510826 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854715243537 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180336634101 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660507561182 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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