:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, living place hase played a significant role in individuals' lives. Human beings are looking for best locations in order to have peaceful living conditions. some people belive that it is better to live in one place than to move from one place to another, while others might take an opposite point of view. I personally believe that living in one town is more beneficial than moving from one city to another. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The most significant reason is that living in one place provides an opportunity for people to get familiar with the city, and people do not need time consuming in order to find best places for their affairs. For instance, I live in Tehran, so I recognize the best hospital with proffesional doctors and state of art equipments. Thus, I do not search for best hospital and I do not need to try many hospitals to find out the best one when I am sick. And, this recognition help me save my time and money.
Another equally important reason is that, living in one town or city allows people to focus on their work or study, instead of moving and facing new challengs. Most of the people these days, have plan for their work or study future In this regard, the dedicate their time and concentration to their current work. In contrast, by immigrating, people could not focus on their work because of new challengs and obstacles which they face at new work place. And, people should allocate their focus to paving new ways for their new work or study place.
To wrap it up,it is better to stay in one town all of life, because moving to another places confuse people from focusing on their goals, and living in one place allows individuals know the town well, in order to saving time and reducing expensses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Did you mean 'to time'?
Suggestion: to time
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...gs. Most of the people these days, have plan for their work or study future In this ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6214511041 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43781847783 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501577287066 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3798479135 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262052125677 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10221759556 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10690342588 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191214398621 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922876381972 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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