Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today many people are working as a researcher in many areas such as technology, medicine, sociology,... Because of these researches, humankind achieved much prosperous and wealth. What is better at doing research? printed material or internet. While many people still prefer printed materials, but personally I prefer the internet for the next two reasons.
First of all, the internet is much cheaper than printed materials. By advancements in IT technology, a lot of things got cheaper especially education. One survey between Iranian universities has found that by expanding the use of the internet between students, the expense of books and materials that an average student spends reduced by 25 percent in 2015. From my own experience when I was in the second year in the University of Tehran I had the Strength of Materials class, and because of our final project, I bought professor Johnson's book for 54000 Toman (Iran's currency). But the next semester which I had the Strength of Material 2 class, I decided to do my project by the help of internet and I didn't buy any book, I remember that by this way I saved some money for my other expenses.
Second, the internet is available everywhere. One of the key specifics of the internet which led to its dominance in many areas is its availability. You can access the Internet almost in everywhere, in your home, class, on the bus, and so on. Also, it is available by many devices such as smartphones, tablets, laptops. When I was working on my final project in undergraduate, I used to go to the central library in the Tehran university which had a lot of reference books. I remember that one day I had to borrow an important book and bring it back to my room. But the librarian told me that it is a very valuable and old book and I don't have the permission to take it away. So with so many difficulties every day I had to go to the library and borrow that book and do my project with the help of that inside the library. But if I used the internet instead of that book, I would be very comfortable. So I decided to use the internet more in my research on the master's thesis.
To sum up, in my view the internet is better than printed materials nowadays. It's so much cheaper than books, and also it's accessible almost everywhere. By the progress of technology, I can't imagine researches without internet, so if you unfamiliar with the internet, hurry up, it's time to get up and learn and use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: masters'; master's
...the internet more in my research on the masters thesis. To sum up, in my view the in...
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...where. By the progress of technology, I cant imagine researches without internet, so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, such as, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61872146119 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7814376132 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477168949772 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0638948591 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9565217391 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279071549794 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866324851329 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649698038074 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171470680022 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249463958207 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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