Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In academics, whether it is undergraduate, graduate or doctoral level the one of the most
important part of the curriculum is research or thesis papers. Personally, I also deal with
certain research works. Some people believe that it is better to use printed material such as
books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. However, I disagree with this
because of some compelling reasons that came from my personal experiences which are as
following.
To begin with, the Internet is a source of unlimited resources. Compared to the books or
article it has a vast amount of valid and true information. Book and articles have limited
information because authors are bound to a certain limit and they only choose a limited amount
of information which can be able to fit in bounded pages. For instance, I remember last
semester when I was writing a research thesis on physics of Blackhole I referred articles and
books on black holes however, I stuck on a certain point and were not able to find any new
information from any books that were available to me. So, I decided to have a look through the
internet and I was able to find valid and worthy points that I could add to my thesis from it.
Moreover, I got the latest information about space agencies that tried works related to my
thesis which were not even printed in any books or articles.
Second, space is big concerned for books and articles it's not the case with internet
materials. As everyone knows the research requires extensive studies of information and to
handle this information is a big task. I remember when my professor and I were doing research
on Deep Space exploration since we studied so many articles and books we made a heap of books
in his cabin that no space was left in his cabin and because of this we also found ourselves in
big trouble during the time of final draft since we were not able to figure out a book to refer
from so many. But if we had used the Internet we could found the same materials and able to
find fast reference because we could able to bookmark that particular part and space were also
not a problem because by internet one can access can any article or book through any portable
devices like personal computer, tablet and were able to manage references quickly.
In sum, from my personal experience and the internet's ability to serve as an unlimited source
to any the topic I would prefer to use the internet in my research work rather than books or
articles.
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...n my professor and I were doing research on Deep Space exploration since we studi...
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... research work rather than books or articles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80449438202 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56479816409 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456179775281 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.2043641358 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.533333333 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23862992108 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099363969732 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129017152036 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741261692913 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103486764566 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.