Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet.” Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world, we have been surrounded by new technologies that one of the most useful of them is the internet in our lives. So widespred is the internet that a controversial question arises here which is whether using printed books and articles would be better than the internet or not in order to conduct a study. As far as I am concerned, I believe that the internet is playing a more effective role in doing researches than books do. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To being with, online resources are more accessible and useful than books printed on papaers, and it would be an asset for researchers. Using the internet, students and researchers have a distinctive opportunity to access online books and articles which are the electronic copy of their real form. As a result, in this way, the limitation of being peresent physicaly in libraries has gone, and it would be possible for every researcher from every where to obtain infinitive information just by one click. Besids, the great merit of the internet that has to be considred is that there are a lot of comments and critisizes that former researchers put in relible scientific websites. Hence, seeing and hearing other oppinions make us to expand our view and look at issues through different lenses. According to a study conducted by University of Lincoln in 2018, it has revealed that more than %87 students would rather do their assigned researches by using the internet for the reasons of accessibility and getting touch with others' views.
Secondly, searching by the internet is faster than printed books and information is not just the form of text. Not only is the internet more accessible, but also, it is faster to find information which means that there many helpful websites or even shortcuts provided by computers such as using the keyies of Ctrl+F to finde any idividual word in a big text. Therefore there is no need to to skims pages in order to find a keyword. moreover, information on the internet has been uploaded with their pictures and videos which give researchers an elaborated view. Consequently, the level of their understant and recognization of any aspects of the subject, which has been questioned by them, increased. Take my experience as an example when I was doing my thesis in the area of Space Robotics. Obviosly, there is no any viedos in books and I had to see the viedos of how robots works in the microgravity environments. Had the internet not been available, I would have not increased my understand how robots are performing their tasks in space.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the distictive advantages of the internet outwhigh disadvantages of printed books. This is because by using of the internet reasearchers have more access to more data base of information included the view of other people, and also finding information is done faster in the other forms excluding texts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91348088531 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85408485428 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48893360161 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3360253623 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.85 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293109605818 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882525801008 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727552206951 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193066793687 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928401600042 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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