Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this new era, every person surrounded by technology, and the Internet is an essential innovation available all over the world. I believe that soft copy material is better than hard copy material to study or research. I strongly disagree that books are an excellent source for research, and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
First of all, hard copy materials are costly, and people have to pay more for oversized books. For Instance, Two-years-ago, during my Ph.D., I have to prepare a poster for presenting at the conference. I need a book named “Western Blot Techniques” by C.V Raman a famous writer; that book was expensive; still, I ordered it, and due to technical reason, it arrived late, and I missed my conference because I cited that book as a reference so, I have to follow their methodology. I realized that If I chose internet material at that time, I never missed my conference. So, this made me panicked.
Another reason for preferring the website materials over printed materials because all the time, books are not available in the current version, but on the websites, it’s always available. For example, 5-years-ago, I was preparing for the GRE for the higher studies. So, for my test preparation, I ordered a book that was highly recommended by my seniors named GRE EXAM PREPARATION. My exam was on the head within two months, and I was waiting eagerly for the delivery of that book; when I received that book, I got to know from my friends that the GRE modified the exam pattern, and within a month, there was no new book for an updated syllabus. At that moment, I felt insane. At that time, I did my overall preparation by the online materials, and that worked, I qualified GRE.
In conclusion, although it is a common belief that the books are more convenient and accessible for the study and the research purpose, I believe it is not valid because they are expensive and not available in the updated version. To me, the Internet is more comfortable for the study or the research purpose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77247191011 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79574828917 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3160698193 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11638652411 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443007473483 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438749707889 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850787617917 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398941052379 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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