Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I share the opinion that people should keep up with events happening around the world and I strongly recommend that people, especially young, educated people, read news everyday.
First, the simplest reason for us to keep following the news is that we can gain knowledge from it, and whenever others talk to us about the events happening around the world, we can discuss with them or make them impressed. This is especially useful when it comes to making friends or attending a job interview. Also, as for ourselves, reading about various news develops our interest in other cultures, bringing us more fun and making us more interesting people.
Second, it is untrue that an event happens without having consequences on us. It may not affect our daily life greatly, but surely it has, more or less, some impact on us. The famous butterfly effect indicates that all things have some sort of connection. The simple vibration of a butterfly's wings may provoke a tornado. Ridiculous as it sounds, butterfly effect occurs everyday, not just in the Final Destination. Focusing on the development of events and collecting information may help us better understand the world, and sometimes bad outcomes can be prevented from happening if we trace the source of an event.
Another tendency that reinforces the butterfly effect is the globalisation, which is now an unstoppable development. With the course of globalisation, countries and regions are no longer separated. The international relationships become more and more delicate, anything that's happening can make an impact. For example, western people might think that the wars in Afghanistan or Saudi Arabia have nothing to do with them. However, wars affect greatly the international relationships between countries and thus the policies and the economy. With the change in the overall environment of countries in war conditions, the natural resources may be greatly influenced, causing the fluctuation of prices. It is likely that the prices of petrol in our daily life are decided by the wars. Learning about these events help us see more clearly how this world functions, as thus enable us to develop an insightful perspective on life. So another benefit is the knowledge we gain and the lessons we learn from these events. From analysing what is happening with others, we can draw a lesson and prevent ourselves from the same mistake, or learn from the good qualities of others. Sometimes by predicting the prices of natural resources, we can even make a fortune.
In conclusion, since the world is constantly changing, and as the world becomes more and more complicated, I am firmly convinced that people should care about what happens around the world, instead of being caged in their own little world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ially young, educated people, read news everyday. First, the simplest reason for u...
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Line 9, column 372, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s as it sounds, butterfly effect occurs everyday, not just in the Final Destination. Foc...
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Line 13, column 271, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...become more and more delicate, anything thats happening can make an impact. For examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, as for, for example, in conclusion, sort of, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15044247788 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81088315313 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533185840708 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0846166001 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164949908579 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045437072639 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390658434176 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101389414344 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00915273952244 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.