Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
have you ever taken a look at international crude oil price? do you know what global collaborations we have addressing the issue of global warming? Or Did you hear that a few weeks ago the leader of ISIS had just been killed? …While many of us do pay close attention to what happens around the world, some might still wonder: why should I care about things that do not have effects in my day-to -day life? In my opinion, it is always necessary to keep aware of what happens in today’s world, as this is very beneficial in many ways, few are as below.
First, knowing global events helps us to predict and prepare for changes that could happen in our own area. Nowadays, it is unlikely for any region to be totally separate from the rest of world. The trend of unified international economy and politics has brought connections between countries and areas closer and closers. As a result of chain reaction, things happen in a far away place might have effect in your home city. if we pay attention to those events, we can think into what could happen to our own area and effect our life, so we can react correspondingly. For example, with the tightened trade policy between us and Chinese government, manufacturers of exported and imported good are largely effected, some companies in these sections ended up downsize their employment, if a worker of such company would’ve learnt about the situation at its early stage, such consequence would be predictable, then he/she would be able to prepare ahead of time, like saving more money in the event of losing the job or starting looking for jobs in other fields.
On the other hand, even for events that are not likely to spread far enough to affect our life, they can still provide a referral for our decision-making. just like learning from our own history, learning from other country or area’s mistakes can prevent us from making the same mistakes. For instance, in 2008, before the bubble burst, us real estate marketing were showing patterns like high mortgage rate with high transaction rates along with other indicating features, this is a valuable adverse case for us to look at when looking into bubbles of our own local housing marking.
Last, learning about events around world helps us to keep open-minded. The process of looking into world beyond our own small world its self presents a wonderful opportunity for us to input new information into our brain. To process all those unfamiliar incidences, all the changing situations, to think through why things are happening in the way they are, we have to train ourselves to think outside what we’ve already known, to keep open-minded.
In conclusion, I think it is important to pay attend to events happening in the world, and everyone can be benefited from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, you know, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85625 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66502227946 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554166666667 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9877770308 48.9658058833 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163536114652 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568956032778 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387224991435 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969415461123 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262509066833 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.