Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people contend that a student should study art and literature first, while others argue that the primary task of students is studying math and science. In my opinion, both arguments are right and wrong, because art, literature, and math, science is both crucial to youths. Students should balance their efforts in these different fields.
On one hand, studying art and literature help human beings to become genteel and interesting. These characters make people more amiable and getting more chances in the modern world. Take my cousin for example. She is a humor and erudite girl in that she read a lot of book and attends many museums. Because of her horizons broaden by literature and arts, she can always give interesting but intellectual communication without giving pressure to others, and earn friendship with all her classmate. Thus, when she graduated, her social capital helped her finding a fantastic job in advertising.
On the other hand, math and science benefits youths to obtain vital logic to analyze and solve problem. With the ability people is more likely to success. My cousin is also a good instance to illustrate this notion. Even though she doesn’t need to use math and science directly in her advertising job, her eminent logic trained by science class in university helps all her task on schedule. She also uses the logic of science to experiment on the effect of advertising and always gets great achievement which then results in her swift promotions.
Accordingly, to become a whole person who truly successes, it is important for students to study all of art, literature, and math, science. To be more specific, without former, people excel at science and math may not have amiable characters to get suitable chance; without latter, youths good at art and literature may not have enough ability to analyze some problem. On the contrary, excelling at all these field enable student to become competitive and have more chances to consummate.
To sum up, I believe that in order to consummate, student should study disparate field of knowledge to obtain the different abilities to be competitive in every aspect of lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of books'.
Suggestion: a lot of books
...humor and erudite girl in that she read a lot of book and attends many museums. Because of he...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...raduated, her social capital helped her finding a fantastic job in advertising. On t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09550561798 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66757522501 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1582775223 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23403363259 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737882241938 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644628147308 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132855730434 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614661049158 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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