Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, life has more complexity and provides people much different news from all over the world. Many people opine that it is better to follow news presented by people who have an opposing view rather than a similar viewpoint. I prefer to watch and read reports from people with similarities; I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, following news from the people who are in the same viewpoint provides people the opportunity of having better conversation and discussion. To clarify more, people feel free and do not hesitate to have some political or any other debates with the one who has some similar beliefs. It is so crucial to have some conversation in many fields without any arguments; therefore, this leads people to have a good conversation and better conclusions. My experiment demonstrates this concept; I recall when I was in university in 2012, the professor divided us into some groups to discuss that year's presidential election. Our group consisted of friends with similar views except one of us with another point of view. Initially, everybody was quiet and provided some comments; after a while, he abruptly shouted at us and tried to insist on his opinion to all the group. If the group contained similar viewpoints, the guy would not shout out on us.
Second, read and watch the news from the person who has the same idea with people results in more peace in life. As an illustration, it is more important to have a peaceful life, though, people should avoid anything, which disturbs their quiet and calmness. The more disagreements people hear in life, the more tensions they get. When people hear news from people who have much in common, it may result in relaxation. In the previous example, I got a bad headache after that group discussion, which gets worth after each session of that class. A migraine that was because of a valueless disagreement, which had no results or any effect on people's life. Hence, people should try to avoid negative persons to have peace and happiness in their life.
By considering all the previous information, one can conclude that it is better to follow the news from the people who have similarities in their viewpoints. Not only help them to have a peaceful life but additionally provides them a better conversation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85037406484 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71282957114 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7662174424 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225480482585 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818063736243 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740372000617 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157220173474 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081549862886 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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