Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Friends have a pivotal role in everyday life. We share our life and feeling with them, moreover, we spent more time with them more than with any of our family members. In this regard, keeping old friends or making new friends have been heated debated among people. I stick to my old friends which I enlighten in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, old friends realize our emotions and needs more than anyone. It does not need to be told or mentioned about your feeling to them. They know our happiness and sorrow and always help us to get through them. For instance, one day I visited one of my old friends who has been my friend since elementary school. At that time, I was very upset of the financial situation I had faced. When I met him, at first sight, he identifies my situation, however, I tried to hide it. In the end, he helped me with great advice to pass the tough condition. Had not I had such an old friend, I could not solve my problem.
The second reason worthwhile mentioning is that it takes a lot of time to trust people to choose them as a friend. To be more specific, with this hectic life, there is no time to find new people to trust. Therefore, keeping old ones is the best way. Although making a new friend with all trial and error would contribute to our life to explore new features, the negative parts weigh positive outcomes.
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific points made in the reading passage. 3
- Do you agree or disagree? People nowadays are morewilling to help other people (giving food or clothing)than in the past. 70
- Do you agree or disagree One can learn a lot about a a person from the books and movies that he likes 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If parents want their children to do well at school, theyshould limit the time their children spend on watchingTV. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The government should provide preschool for 3 to 5 years old children 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4126984127 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32130307624 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0875317259 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354156481174 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112813674822 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877513751513 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257704467712 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706829804064 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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