Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
It’s a waste of money for the government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.
Where government should spend money on has been a issue debated for a long time. While space exploration is important to some extent, I agree that it’s a waste of money for the government to fund space travel or space exploration. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore below.
First and foremost, while almost everyone has to pay tax, most of the people don’t benefit from space travel or space exploration. For instance, building a park directly allows the residents to have a place to relax, do exercise and embrace nature. Another example would be that if the government make everyone vaccinated, the whole country can stop agonizing from coronavirus. However, only a few astronauts can go to space. Therefore, most of the people may feel disconnected to it. In other words, instead of spending finite resources on space exploration, focusing on what makes the people live better is more important.
Secondly, where governments spend money implies what the society cares, and what do best for the whole society. For example, since Brazil is famous for their outstanding soccer players, the government might place emphasis on the soccer industry and fund the athletes more than other countries. Therefore, Brazil may earn fame through it, and many people would go to visit the country. Finally the whole country thrives because of it.
Last but not least, comparing to the potential outcome of space exploration, it costs huge amount of money and takes a long period of time. To illustrate, some people would argue that if another planet that human beings can survive is found, it may be a solution to the problem of the finite sources on Earth. Nevertheless, even if that planet does exist, it would take unimaginable amount of money to find it, turn it to somewhere human beings can live, and even send people there.
In summation, spend money on space travel or space exploration could be a waste of money because of the reasons mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96696696697 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60657200957 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4516822837 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280158629264 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921402348767 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108046595083 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185694550604 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112091729844 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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