Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue of the that most advertisements make products seem better than they really are. Some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that most advertisements make products seem better than they really are because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the rapid development in the technology today makes the products seem better than they really are. The technology today makes it easiest for the advertisement to attract the customers by adding special effect that make the products look more attractive. Additionally, the technology makes the product quality looks more efficient than what they really are.
Another point why I advocate that the advertisements make the products look better than the reality is the point that the advertisement concentrates on them. In the advertisement only the positive things of the products are mention and neglect the bad things. Eventually, the consumer things that there is not ang negative things in the products and buy it.
Finally, it is well-established fact that the advertisement makes the product looks with high quality by talking about magic things. For instance, the actors in the advertisements fly when they drink the product. However, no one can fly but this mystery attracts the customers specially the children.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says that people how hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When it comes to the issue of the that most ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, well, for instance, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12341772152 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76826753755 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1804561115 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337679883174 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123103127837 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933116653291 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164091561265 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105216708202 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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