Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, the advertisement is the hallmark of a successful business, which helps producers increase their sells. I personally think that in commercials, companies make their products look better than they really are. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, products often are advertised by famous people whom we admire and trust. When our famous artists or showmen tell us in a commercial that a particular item is excellent to use, we tend to believe in this statement since we love these celebrities and are certain in their honesty. My personal experience illustrates this concept. I have an incredibly dry and irritated skin and I always search for new creams to nourish it. Recently, I saw a video on television where one of my favorite actresses praised a novel lotion for people with the same problem that I have. She told that this cream was a breakthrough in cosmetology and everyone should give it a shot. I decided to follow her advice and purchased a tube of the cream in the local store. How disappointed I was to find out that the product had the immensely unpleasant smell and did not work in the way that it was supposed to. That is why I think that celebrities` statements in commercials can be misleading.
Secondly, sometimes manufacturers hide disadvantageous of their goods while advertising them. The main goal of a commercial is to sell a product and for this reason companies describe a lot of benefits of an item but they stay silent about its drawbacks. For instance, when a few days ago I saw on a street a huge banner with an advertisement of a novel medicine that treats the common cold. A text on the sheet had a lot of information about how this drug has helped to relieve symptoms of the illness such as running nose and cough. However, the side effects of this medication were written on the very bottom of the banner and the print was so fine that I could barely read it. In this way, I could have been attracted by the listed benefits of the drug but overlook the side effects and would have struggled with them. To that end, in my opinion, a lot of ads lack important details.
To conclude, I strongly believe that in commercials, goods are represented better than they are in the reality. This is because they advertised by people whom we admire, and their producers keep back crucial information about them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, really, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67605633803 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82176419083 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4453365351 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14775634291 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432804075161 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547646787733 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102998608752 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399137199586 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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