Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
In life, people have always faced tremendous difficulties which can seem at the time to be pointless and crucial. However, do these events teach us invaluable lesions? Some people believe life is a random series of events, with no lasting meaning. On other hand, I believe that difficulties and obstacles in life make us stronger and do become meaningful lessons that we carry through life.
To begin with, although facing challenges in life is a difficult task, it really strengthens our confidence in the future. Some people are very sensitive; they are not even ready to bear minor pain in life. But once they overcome with major difficulties in life, they become stronger and they do not get that experience by reading books. The experience of my classmate Alex is a good example of this. Alex is a student who came from Mexico for his graduation studies. Initially, he was a very anxious student in the class. As a result, he couldn’t focus on his studies and got the lowest grade in the class. He was really frustrated when he saw his marks. But, he started to do extra work and take special classes and worked hard. What’s more, he got best grade in the following semester. Since, he work hard and faced a hard time, as a result, he was successful.
What more, experiences in a life might be adverse a time we face, But it become a motivation to the others while reading or lessening their auto biography. All human beings are struggle with hard time at least one time in their entire carrier, but only limited people experiences only motivate others. Take Gandhi as a example of this. Even though he completed his graduation in a one of the reputed university in London, he went in to the prism for the sack of nation. He was faced a lot of difficulties in his life such as hunger strike to get the independence to India. As a result, he became Father of the Nation and he inspired a lot of people and makes them to work for the country. This example clearly shows that although, people struggle in their life, they become a inspiration and part of their carriers.
In conclusion, although some may disagree, I personally feel that difficulties in life always encourage people towards success in life and make them as a role model to other people as well. I recommend people to consider hard time in their life in a positive view and a great success is ahead for them in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, then, well, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62529274005 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63550858063 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489461358314 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0487586942 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2916666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153638549577 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452137161417 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042999021559 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955868056158 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273666983505 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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