Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A person is made up of 2 things first, the outer appearance and second the inside content. The outer appearance may not always depict the inside content of any human being. Our eyes can only the outer appearance of other people, the way they dress up, the materialist things they have etc, Our eyes can't really see the inner content like the their true characteristics or talent or the person really is behind those outer appearances. So according to me one should never judge a person by external appearances. Below few reasons from the same.
firstly, ability or talent does can be present any human being and is not restricted to only rich people neither to only financially challenged people. There is a talented man who is scholar in any field but might not be rich, so might not be wearing good dress, might not have a expensive hair cut, in short might not appealing by sight. We can not judge him all these external appearance.
Secondly, believer of simple living high thinking. There are many people who believe in the concept of simple living and high thinking, they don't really like to show off either their talent or their wealth to the world and prefer living as simple as possible. For example APJ Abdul Kalam Azad, who was Indian president but used to live simple life and he is also the rocket man of india.
Finally, Going by looks or outer appearance may also by affect the society and causes social racism. There people are suffered just before they the way there are or the way like to dress up. Such types of issues are present all over the world and we need to get rid of such systems. For example its very difficult to find a place for rent in India in a normal for people who are Muslim or belong to other caste. The people in India identify such people by their dress up and judge them accordingly. I confident its not in only there are other forms of racism all over the world.
In conclusion, I believe all the people are human being above all other things so, people should never be judged on the basis of outer appearance. We should try to make this world a better place by trying to avoid doing such acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52051282051 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26632582424 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489743589744 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4473132131 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7894736842 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949901404417 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383257673264 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741234374038 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542733917787 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488566621778 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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