Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Before arriving in this world, no one knows nothing. It is through the experience and learning that a person learns something.
This is a universal fact. So, likewise, when we are too young to go to school, our parents are the ones who will teach us about life.
Anything they teach will always be with us forever and also can be seen in our behavior. Although some might believe that
illiterate parents cannot teach their child much in early age, I believe that our parents are the best teacher we will be getting in our life.
After we are born, we stay with our parents 24 hours a day for almost 4 years. The person which we are going to be in our future life depends in these years, what our parents teach us. No parents want bad things to happen to their child. All parents want the best for their child. So, they provide us with the most appropriate lessons we will be going to need in our life.
Parents teach us to be considerate and tactful. They teach us to be respectful towards elder and also towards younger people.
My parents also taught me these things due to which I am considered the most tactful person in my community. Person's prestige is solely dependent on the behavior he/she executes. Parents provide us with the lessons and insights that help us to gain prestige in our community and we can live our lives more easily.
When we go to school, our teacher in the school only teach us about the curriculum, we will not be taught anything about our life which is, in fact, the most important topic to learn about.
The only person that will teach us about our life is our parents. They told us to work harder to reach our goals, their hard work to make our life beautiful and the way we should work harder to enjoy our life.
Me, when I was in my 6th 7th grade, I was very mischievous and carefree. I would not even do my homework let alone study for exams. They sat me down one fine day, they told about the hardships they had to face due to their parents not working harder, so, they did not want the same for us.
After that, I began to study much harder to live my life happily.
In a nutshell, parents are the teachers who teach us the most important lesson in our life. We can easily see the life of people turning drastically after they follow their parents' insights. Me, when I was younger, was careless and oblivious about my life, but after my parents made me known about their hardships, I got into the right track.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40043763676 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18497795794 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44420131291 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0299273483 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3461538462 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5769230769 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0693406880988 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283294250031 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280877321789 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328792933463 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302694759438 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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