Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Youth freestanding is one the most controversial topic between scientists and even common people. Annually many books and articles are published to deal with it which is a sign of the subject's importance. Some people are of the opinion that parents should intervene in their children's decisions. Personally, I believe the problem is more complicated than it seems; in any decisions we should consider our children's opinion and interests. I feel this way for several reasons which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First of all, we should be aware that how much the decision is important? and how the decision is able to affect our child's future or situation? Totally, we should measure the decision importance. By determining the decisions' importance, the amount of our intervene will be clear. But totally, whole the decision should not be made by parents or relatives; in each level parents should ask the child's opinion about the situation. Fore example, in the process of selecting a major course for a student, the opinion of the child should be consider valuable as his/her parent.
The second reason, by denying the child view in a decision for his/her future, we are going to damage to his/her selfesteem. Many researches and studies has shown that including children in decision making process and giveing them a chance to propose their views is an effective way to augment their freestanding and selfesteem. We should give opportunities to children to strength their decision making power, because in the future they will be presented in such situations that need to make a decision lonely. So including children in decision process is a good training for them to grow their socila skills.
The third, In some cases, children have better information and perspective to a problem or an event; as a result, in such situations is better that children have more role in the decision making process than parents and relatives. Therefore, the parents view and suggests can be misleading and parents should avoid to do such tasks. For example, when I was thirteen years old, I had vast information about teachers and schools, but about my family? sorry, they did not know much about schools and teachers. I remember, my that allowed me to investigate about schools and I select the best ones. My dad all the time recall that memory as a sign that some times we should trust to our child's decisions and information.
In conclusion, I do not agree we should thoroughly make a decision for our children. Based on the subjects' importance we should be careful about the children's opinion. The second reason is that by denying the children's view we are going to damage to their personality, and finally, In some cases, children are more familiar with the subject than parents; therefore it is better to trust their information and decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subjects'' or 'subject's'?
Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
... to deal with it which is a sign of the subjects importance. Some people are of the opin...
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Suggestion: And
...hat how much the decision is important? and how the decision is able to affect our ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decisions'' or 'decision's'?
Suggestion: decisions'; decision's
...decision importance. By determining the decisions importance, the amount of our intervene...
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Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...ent, the opinion of the child should be consider valuable as his/her parent. The secon...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
...ts can be misleading and parents should avoid to do such tasks. For example, when I was thi...
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Suggestion: Sorry
...chers and schools, but about my family? sorry, they did not know much about schools a...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subjects'' or 'subject's'?
Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
...decision for our children. Based on the subjects importance we should be careful about t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97077244259 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74853869943 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446764091858 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5813812232 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2083333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273507781223 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879532598067 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579177384613 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17229143034 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350011571208 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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