Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being one of the most proliferated incentive subject to achieve a job, as far as I am concerned, the topic of the essay considers the importance of alacrity to do things. It is obvious there is a causal relationship between the quality of the job which is supposed to be done on the one hand and the tendency to fulfill it on the other hand. Based on this logical relationship, I am strongly incline to take the side of opposite statement that people should always do things that they enjoy doing. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, if people do unfavorable things, from emotionally speaking, they usually try to evade them. As current psychological findings reveal, the enjoyment plays a critical role as the first incentive persuading people to do a thing in the best way and further encourage others to examine it. Regarding the psychological viewpoint, it is also worth nothing to consider harmful impression of doing unfavorable things on different parts of people life. For example, if a father of a family do things without his fondness, he categorically will impress his family by some irritable behaviors such as anger, sadness, etc. On contrary, the father who loves his job will bring about much more fun for his family.
Another primary reason, as I pointed out in the introduction, can be attributed to the quality of the job. To do some critical jobs such as security jobs and doing some stuff associated with health care subject, undoubtedly, the quality cannot be neglected. It goes without saying, neither the cost nor time cannot compensate the crucial role of fondness to do these jobs. In other words, to persuade people who detest do somethings that they hate, even the enhancement of salary or an increase in the time to do unfavorable jobs may not be effective as the necessity of people enjoyment.
Aside from the points I made above, job conditions sometimes oblige people to do things that they hate but I cannot regard this subject as a permanent situation. Considering the vital role of psychological advisers, to my best knowledge, they can cardinally organize the human sources to do appropriate jobs based on their affections.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot disagree more about the statement that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing regarding the importance of job quality and psychological impression of doing unfavorable things.
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...priate jobs based on their affections. Taking all these perspectives into accou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, for example, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02403846154 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90056089633 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516826923077 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8717199912 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374556510974 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131385508146 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101461986707 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241842505096 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862116541957 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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