Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Considering the essential requirement for a trip, in addition to clothing and personal care items, I am strongly inclined to take my laptop as an inseparable thing of all my trips. Being one of the most proliferated popular stuff for all youth people, the importance of digital devices cannot be neglected. It is obvious that there are a lot of advantages for a passenger who equipped with the laptop as the main well-known digital device. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the main advantage of a laptop during the particular journey is the accessibility to connect internet. It goes without saying, the necessity of internet as a dramatic useful tool as well as the well-trained tour leader can be indicated as the perfect solution for all unpredictable situations. For instance, if I encounter an unknown allergy, I will find at least one solution to lesson the unpleasant sequential impacts. Moreover, there are substantial applications which propose the nearest medical place for treatment. It is also worth noting that carrying a laptop or even a tablet in a trip provide a plenty of options to enjoy exceedingly. For instance, I can readily find the appropriate places for accommodation as well as well-known and cost effective restaurants for having surprisingly food. In addition, I get to reserve the suitable facilities for traveling on time. Thus, it is more advisable to take a laptop in addition to other things.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the entertainment characteristics of the laptops. It is obvious, with the numerous and professional applications as well as programs installed on it, I will scarcely feel boring. For example, I can play video games or watch desired movies to prevent any monotonous feeling in the trip. As the current psychological findings reveal, the critical role of watching movies or playing video games can implied as the main advantage for children or teenager when it comes indoor entertainments.
Aside from the point I made above, I categorically can ascribe my laptops as a professional storage of my knowledge. I saved all my articles and my favorite books in the laptop hard drives. During the trip, I can refer to any kind of information that is need for the special work. For example, as I am the university instructor, I can revise the students' research papers or their assignments.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I absolutely put emphasis on the presence of my laptop in the trip regarding the accessibility to connect internet, entertainment characteristics and professional storage of my knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernet, entertainment characteristics and professional storage of my knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16551724138 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20874910443 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5228230035 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194999404719 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591108204062 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436714190205 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107045740533 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519034693803 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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