Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment, and not enough time on more serious duties and obligations. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people state that it is becoming ordinary to see people having more pleasure during their leisure time and then, spending more time with it than in their own work performing hard work. However, others believe otherwise. They think that people are more hard work nowadays then they did in the past. In my opinion, people nowadays enjoy more their leisure time and spend less time with serious matters. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, people nowadays are focus more on entertainment than they did in the past because the job requires too much from them. For example, one of my friends had to go through therapies because his work was demanding a lot from him and he did not stand at the time and had to change the way he was working. Currently, he has been saving more time for pleasure than he used to do in the past and has been having a better life. Therefore, this example elucidates that people are spending more time with satisfaction than with more serious obligations.
Moreover, there are more people who are ditching hard work because they believe that working hard does not pay off and they try to enjoy more their leisure time. For instance, in my country, there are many homeless who are on street asking for help even sometimes receiving a huge amount of money. Obviously they do not have a real work, but what they earn on street is enough for their subsistence. Thus, this instance clarifies that people are being happier with a simple life than many others who work hard.
Furthermore, there is the case of those sort of people who are already born in a rich family and do not need to look for serious matter. These are who we can call the millionaires because the merely matter they have to do is being capable of managing the family fortune. As one example of it, Bill Gates who only enjoy the life without any frets. Hence, this last example elucidates that there are some cases where people do not need to worry with serious matters.
Finally, I strongly believe that people do not want to worry with serious matters because some are already born in rich families, others prefer living on street and the last people have suffered with hard work in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, even so, for example, for instance, i feel, sort of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56892230576 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21568626961 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461152882206 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7771035549 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.277777778 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249352680168 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926601946299 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846637851051 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151780287776 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527765912849 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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