Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a widely supported controversy about whether a person should make an important decision alone or should involve in a discussion with the experienced people. Actually, I think there are lots of mistakes can be occurred if someone makes his vital decision alone such as it may direct to the wrong way or sometimes, everyone may blame the person due to his fail decision. Thus, my next sentences will explore the reasons in favor of the statement which denotes a person should never make his important decisions alone.
First and foremost, when people stay single and prone to make their own decisions, they can be influenced by emotions, anxiety, or confusions. As a result, they can solve any issue in a false way. For instance, if a boy wants to marry a girl without informing his family members, friends, or close persons. There may be a chance of turmoil since his family might deny the marriage, and they can be separated from each other due to lots of controversies. In contrast, they would marry with the support of family, friends, and other members, then everyone could help them if they faced any internal problems.
Secondly, taking a crucial decision singly can lead to a harmful consequence. If a man wants to start a business with a huge deposit of money alone, he can face lots of problems. For example, a deceitful company can steal his money or he can invest all of the money in the wrong way. Thus, his asset will be wasted. In contrast, if the man could discuss with his closest persons who have deep knowledge of investing the money he can be directed to the right path.
Furthermore, there are many conveniences of discussing any issues before making the final decision. If we closely observe, then we will found that the good decision makers take suggestions from experienced people who worked in their pursuing fields. By sharing the opinions, we can strengthen our relationship alongside it will save our time and asset. Also, nobody can blame us if we fail somehow in any cases.
In essence, the aforesaid endeavors present that taking any important decision is a foolish idea, and I am not willing to do this. In contrast, sharing ideas will bring the optimum solution of a problem, so, I'm always inspired to make my important decisions by discussing someone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 9.8082437276 265% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81313131313 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64457967414 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9516896691 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.315789474 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174149693993 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572357045029 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827330656864 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105321356337 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103591742272 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.