Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that governments’' decisions have had a significant impact on the way people of a society live. In this regard, one controversial question is whether governments should provide internet access for the people at no cost like what they do in other areas such as building roads or not. I firmly believe that it is not only better for the governemts but also for the people to have a free access to the internet. To support this there are myriads of reasons, two of which are going to be aptly elucidated through the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason that comes to my mind is the fact that by having a costless access to the internet, people and business owners are able to not only create new lines of business in order to enlarge the circle of the economy, but also develop and expand their current business. In fact, since nowadays poeple, regrdless of their age, use their cell-phones and personal computers more intensely for fulfilling their various tasks and also having fun, they are more dependent on the internet for their daily life. This will create a huge opportunity for the governments to invest in the internet infrastructure to utilize this opportunity. That governments allocate their budget to provide free internet access for the people of society will lead those people to use their minds to elevate production level of their country as a whole. After implementing this method, the first organization who benefits is the government because it can collect more taxes with which could invest in more profitable projects. For instance, working as data scientist in an internet based start-up three years ago, I realized that the company's high level managers were struggling with a serious issue which hindered their progress toward their goals. After a while, the government announced that they are going to provide national internet for all of the people at no cost. Soon, as a result, the company could increase its sale level owing to the fact that there were more poeple who could make purchases using the free internet access. Having allocated a proportion of its budget to provide interent for the people at no cost, the government not only could create more business opportinities for the people and companies, but also could collect higher taxes to fill its budget defecit. Had the governemt not taken those steps, it might not have been possible for internet-based start-ups to reach their goals and have a broader market.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that by doing this, the government set the stage for the people to enjoy a better communication experience. if people have no need to go to other locations to connect with others, the need for things like building roads will diminish, and the government can use the saved money for running other useful projects which are more beneficial for all members of the society such as education.
To sum up, taking all the aforementiond reasons to account, one can conclude that it seems a wise decision to provide free internet access for the whole society. The more people have access to the internet, the more the governemt and the peopel will benefit.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'free access'.
Suggestion: free access
...ernemts but also for the people to have a free access to the internet. To support this there ...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'costless access'.
Suggestion: costless access
...s to my mind is the fact that by having a costless access to the internet, people and business ow...
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Line 2, column 1351, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... going to provide national internet for all of the people at no cost. Soon, as a result, t...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...njoy a better communication experience. if people have no need to go to other loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2708.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92363636364 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62555779198 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465454545455 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 850.5 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5883991078 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.444444444 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280454121191 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109284294068 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713888070002 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198328370772 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281155088538 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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