Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this time of age, people appreciate the opportunities of being able to have access to a vast number of services. Many citizens believe that Internet could never be equalized with buildings and roads. However, in my opinion, the government should consider Internet as a valuable service, which really is part of public.

First of all, having access to Internet will benefit our population because the possibilities of getting connected with each other everywhere in the world are high. People would need a smart digital device such as a computer or an i pad to communicate with their loved once from all over the world. For example, two decades ago, people struggled to communicate with their family members over the seas. My uncle lived in America at that time, even though he had a phone and computer, the Internet service was not that good. After the years passed by, new technology was improved and we used to speak with my uncle almost every month. We were exited and could not wait to talk to him. If the technology was not going to change, we may not have had the opportunity to keep our connections alive.

Moreover, nowadays, the lifestyle has changed people's demands. The majority of people work remotely. It is a necessity having access to Internet, so the government should seriously consider this and try to invest in initiating programs were people could easily use the Internet as a working tool. To put it in other words, today's marketplace is offering jobs, where workers could work from their own homes, they just need to have a computer and have internet access. For example, my brothers experience is a compelling example of this. After he graduated, he started working from home. This was convenient for him because he did not have to commute every day. His company was located two hours far from his home. So, for my brother having Internet service was crucial, otherwise he could had not completed his job. According to this experience, the internet service should be considered essential for people, and the government has to play its role to make it available for all people.

In conclusion, providing Internet should be significantly considered by the government. This is because people use internet for communication purpose, and because nowadays, general people use it as a working tool.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'i'?
Suggestion: an; i
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmute every day. His company was located two hours far from his home. So, for my ...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...service was crucial, otherwise he could had not completed his job. According to thi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95140664962 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6753311813 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537084398977 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7034024231 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245443577472 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693569027955 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061992676462 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158040352204 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154018889883 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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