Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether the education of children appears more difficult today than before, has been brought to the attention of parents and teachers. Relevant individuals believe that the new technology has been a huge destruction for children's education. In my opinion, children benefit from practicing online games and using other smart devices.
One of the reasons is because playing video games and using cell phones with multiple options and features will help kids to develop new skills, which will help them not only in the present assignment but also in the long run. For example, to be more specific, if children use their cell phones, which play the role not just to call someone but to use it as a study tool such as read electronic books or audio books, that will help them to be more effective in their studying. Overall, this tells us that the usage of smart devices will utilize children's learning, by make it easier and meaningful.
The other reason why today, it is not a difficult task educating youngsters is because browsing on social networking web sites will give parents and teachers new ideas and strategies to become more creative. Nowadays, there is a variety of web sites designed only for teachers and parents to show them useful strategies to teach their children and students. For example, statistics have revealed that 78 percent of parents and teachers, who followed the advice or took advantage of the information shared on social web sites, were more equipped with ideas. They were inspired and became creative in their strategic approach on teaching their children. On the contrary, the counterparts who did not used these webs, found it difficult to proceed and be creative. Therefor, children lack the ability to learn quick. According to this evidence, using social networking web sites will help parents and teachers to become creative, which will make their children's learning easy and fun.
In conclusion, educating youths today should be easier than in the past. This is because cell phones, video games will help them to develop skills that are necessary in the long run, and because using social media web sites is going to help parents and teacher to come up with new strategies on how to teach their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reative. Nowadays, there is a variety of web sites designed only for teachers and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01052631579 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52869405599 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6033722911 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.933333333 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287402138473 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100669045979 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569234863006 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184520243168 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409629443363 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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