Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Upon the arrival of the digital era, people are concerning more and more about the Internet services that their government can provide them. Some people maintain that it is of vital importance for the government to offer free Internet access to all its citizens. While from my perspective, I would stand on the opposite side for a few primary reasons that I will illustrate in the following.
In the first place, there is no doubt that the budget for providing free Internet access will be an arduous burden not only to the government but also to the citizens. Internet access to all citizens means more investment in the construction of the Internet, from which more taxes would also result. To be more explicit, more Internet accesses need more fiber cables to connect further districts and more cost of repairing and restoring the pieces of equipment. Consequently, the economic burden will be exerted on all the citizens, which might cause more extreme problems for the impoverished families that are already struggling to make a living.
Furthermore, it is definitely unpredictable for the government to provide free Internet access without any discrimination. For instance, it might provide more opportunities for hackers to attack the government's Internet and even some essential computer systems. In addition, with more people contacting the Internet, the contents on the Internet will become harder and harder for the government to administrate, which might lead to more harmful information flows. With the loader complaining voices of parents about their children learning something terrible from the Internet, it is essential that more strict rules for contacting the Internet ought to be executed. Nothing can be more regretful than some children getting to know something violent or R-rated by just a glance at the web pages bouncing to their eyes. Charging Internet access and real-name authentication will efficiently decrease the odds of such things by setting a relatively high threshold to get contacted with the Internet.
Moreover, Internet access at no cost offers people more digital addicting entertainment so that relationships between people will become more and more distant. We have all encountered situations where we automatically bow to play on our mobile phones and become silent after finishing dinner even if we are meeting with friends that have not seen for a long time. This sort of embarrassment could be avoided by being less dependent on the Internet to provide us with comfort and entertainment that are designed to get us addicted. If free Internet access is not available, more and more people will consider the cost of the Internet and return to their original life so that they can build stronger connections with their acquaintances.
To put it into a nutshell, with great appreciation of the convenience and pleasure that the Internet provides us, I still insist that the government ill behooves to offer free access to all citizens for its heavy economic burden, insidious effects owing to no discrimination, and more distance with social connections.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... the arrival of the digital era, people are concerning more and more about the Internet servic...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...to the citizens. Internet access to all citizens means more investment in the constructi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, even so, for instance, in addition, no doubt, sort of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26358148893 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93089689924 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490945674044 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3437147699 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6111111111 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299093090558 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12162069329 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645941913803 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200185562829 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192182746687 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... the arrival of the digital era, people are concerning more and more about the Internet servic...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...to the citizens. Internet access to all citizens means more investment in the constructi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, even so, for instance, in addition, no doubt, sort of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26358148893 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93089689924 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490945674044 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3437147699 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6111111111 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299093090558 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12162069329 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645941913803 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200185562829 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192182746687 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.