Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is undeniable that rules are important to organize people's life. Usually, societies are responsible for putting these rules, and they expect young people to follow and obey them. In my opinion, rules these days are not that strict according to past days.
First, daily bases are more complicated and busy, so societies are trying to help in releasing the stress by making the rules easier for them. In response, people will be able to follow and obey the rules without being overwhelmed. For instance, in my country people have to invite their friend once or twice a week for dinner, but when I wake up early at the morning and check my to do list, I find that I have many things to do starting from house cleaning and ending with finishing my thesis. Consequently, I do not have time to invite or even to contact with anyone. In my case, my friends help me with this issue, and every week they buy me food rather than asking me to cook for them.
Second, people now are open minded in comparison to people in the past,so they affect the rules of societies and make it easier for them. For example, when my mother was in her twenties, she had to drop her school, and she had to help her parents in taking care of her younger siblings. In addition to that, she was not able to reject or oppose that because all girls at her age supposed to do that. Today, girls have the rights to choose what they want to do. they can complete their school and have a job after that.
To sum up, I think societies are less strict not only because people minds are different, but also people are not willing to obey or follow strict rules in addition to all their duties. even though I agree with having less strict rules, but I believe that there are concepts that we can not leave it and we still have to be strict with them especially when we are trying to raise our kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...nded in comparison to people in the past,so they affect the rules of societies and ...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
... rules in addition to all their duties. even though I agree with having less strict ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35632183908 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17878255164 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.952455805 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220874926349 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837341823978 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682643637962 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155612431074 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648717805781 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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