Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, internet has had a great influence on life style. No question will remain without answer by use of internet. Although many people believe that internet provides them with valuable information, I strongly disagree with this. In my opinion many problems can be arose by using too much internet. I provide you three reason to support this idea:
First of all, some information in the internet are not accurate and complete. For instance, when a drug is searched through internet, usually benefits of the drug will be found more than side effects, while, these are more important to know because, the can develop life threatening problems for the person consuming that drug. Thus, I think the information on the internet are good but it is not complete enough. The internet should be used only as supplemental resource of information. In the example above, it is more beneficial to ask a pharmacist about a drug.
In addition, exposure to a lot of information without having background about the topic is confusing and can lead to make wrong decisions. For example, when someone wants to buy a new car, the first resource he uses to search about advantages and disadvantages of different cars is the internet. However there are a lot of detailed information on the internet which most of them are even not necessary to know and it is almost impossible to distinguish more essential information without having knowledge about various aspects of the cars. That is why I believe that torrents of information through the internet can be problematic.
Another reason is that a lot of information may cause people to worry about everything in life and can be stressful. For instance, when a person read about disease in the internet, he will always worry about getting that disease and this stress has such a strong effects on body and mind that increase the possibility of getting that disease. I remember when I was intern at hospital, I searched each case that I saw in the internet to learn more about that case. However, as I studied more signs and symptoms, I tried to find them in my body and when one of them was found, I freaked out and thought that I got that disease. For this reason, in my view, knowing more than enough about everything is not a good life style, which is one of the results of easy access to internet in these days life of people.
In conclusion, because of inaccuracy of information in the internet, confusion the stress caused by that, I think access to much information can be problematic in modern life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79498861048 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73391796119 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476082004556 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1183610177 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.789473684 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1052631579 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195700176567 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716618116875 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714974393665 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125433657072 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740172024596 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.