do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
You are like those you are friend with. This is the concept of majority of quotes which I heard and read about friends and the efficacy of them on our life. Although some teachers as aware, wise and experienced person who change our life with nurturing our talents and giving us good advices, the most positive or negative affection in our lives come from the groups of friends of us.
The most significant reason is, human are attracted to people who are similar to them in age, education and social situation. To illustrate, a depressed person search for inactive and sad people who can understand his or her feelings or scientists follow persons who are interested in their field or the ones who are the chief in their favorite major. Similar to this happen in school between students. Students are in the same age, interests, physical and mental situation so they affect each other.
Secondly, we spend most of our times with our family and our friends in second step. We share our thoughts, happy and sad times and new experiences with them then their characteristic, behavior and opinion effect on us and that is why making friends is one of the most important and effective part of our life, which in my opinion, can propel us forward on the journey of success or set back.
To sum up, teachers as guides have an important role in showing the way of achievement to us but the most significant persons, who impact us, are the people we are most in contact with like family member, colleges and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... then their characteristic, behavior and opinion effect on us and that is why mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67041198502 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48552600034 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7671848669 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125111309592 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051018501251 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500202079226 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738733603793 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123901955372 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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