do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Enjoyment of life, happiness, self-satisfaction are some of the inner feelings which are not measurable with quantitative scales. I firmly believe that young and old people, both enjoy their lives however, in different manners. On the other hand, we cannot assert that young people relish they life and old people do not. We should say that the definition of enjoyment is different in various ages.
First, youth are more energetic and active. They have got inquisitive and enthusiastic minds which motivate them to discover new things, take some risks, achieve new experiences and do all of the works which make life more excited. In my opinion, Young age is the most important and appropriate period for these works, because you have enough time to build your life with your decisions, joy your achievements and compensate your faults however youth should pay attention to this point that times fly so they should try to use all of their potentials for better life besides amusements and enjoyment of life.
Second, elderly people are wiser, experienced and have a broad outlook. They joy their lives with spending time with family, travel and etc. To illustrate, in a family gathering for a picnic in the nature, young people prefer to play, swim in river and run but elder people would like to lie down, listen to the sound of birds or walk. There is no standard which express who is enjoying his or her life, all of them arr happy and enjoy their times.
To sum up, the meaning of enjoyment and happiness are changing among period of ages. Young people and old people because of the changes happened in their age relish their life in different way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... life, happiness, self-satisfaction are some of the inner feelings which are not measurable...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e risks, achieve new experiences and do all of the works which make life more excited. In ...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... with spending time with family, travel and etc. To illustrate, in a family gathering fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, thus, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84154929577 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49725846506 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5951783667 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306423939945 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104511814237 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667122608934 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191716571689 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416767607219 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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