Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, there are various occupations with different social levels. Some of them are considered as a valuable career, while others have less value in society. Although some people are of the opinion that teachers' social level has decreased these days, I firmly believe they have a better situation in the current era compared to the past. I have two main reasons for my perspective, which will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, in order to know about a job's value in society, it is necessary to consider the salary of that particular career. These days, being a teacher is one of the highest-paid jobs in many countries. To shed more light on it, I am going to mention my chemistry teacher, Mr. Nami. He is one of the best mentors in his field, and I heard from other students that he has almost $100 hourly wage, which is an excellent salary among jobs in my country. On the other hand, in the past, teachers are practically middle-class citizens in each society and did not earn lots of money from teaching to students, so they had to have a second job to afford life's costs.
Secondly, when we compare teachers' current conditions with the previous decades, it is apparent that they had a better social situation. In the past, most of the girls did not like to be a school teacher's wife. However, now we see lots of girls dreaming about marring with a teacher since most of them are considered as sophisticated people in any community. My uncle is a retired teacher; once he told me about his juvenile memories, he always complained about those days' circumstances. He mentioned that whenever he wanted to start a relationship with a girl, they run away when they realized his job. But it is not the same for my brother, who is a freshman teacher and teaches robotic in a girls' high school. He even told his pupils that he is married because he noticed some girls wanted to go out with him. That exactly shows that people are interested in teaching jobs because it has superior caste in public, besides, it's considerable financial benefits.
To make the long story short, according to the arguments mentioned earlier, it is evident that these days being a tutor is a high-ranked job with a good salary and a good position among other occupations. I think it is why we see more happy teachers nowadays in comparison with the past generation who always complain about their situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68235294118 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64984846469 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531764705882 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7774175731 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151785296877 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509322310215 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333177445928 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980995833246 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00399070237082 0.0645574589148 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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