Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, Cars play an important role in our lives. It makes us more convenient to move to other destinations so that we can save much time to do other more vital things. Moreover, cars bring us possibly to move to other remote cities. However, in my opinion, I consider that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Why do I say that? Let me purpose some statements.
First, due to the advancement of technology, many special and unexpected products be invented today such as smartphones and flying boats. Thus, we can logically deduce that there may be something new to become our new transportation. Maybe there wil not have any cars in the future and the replacement is vehicle which can contain much people such as buses but can be more efficient or more convenient for people. Maybe it can have the convenience of taxi and the capacity and the publicity of the bus. It may achieve if the traffic light may not be used anymore in the future. People can easily set up where to go and the whole system can calculate quickly to find the shortest path and the fewest time cost to arrive at the destination. If technology keeps skyrocketing, this complicated, completed and sophisticated system may be realized.
In addition, all of us know that carbon dioxide has negative effect on our environment. Cars are one of the major causes of the emission in modern time. With the human explosive growth, almost every family has not only one car. Sometimes people decide to drive the car only themselves. It is not an efficient way to do it, because cars can contain almost five persons at one time. Therefore, if everyone decides to drive by themselves when they are alone, it puts heavy pressure on the environment. Fortunately, people have already realized the impact on the environment, and the environmental groups and governments both put much effort to call the public to use public transportation more or ride the bike or just only walk. Moreover, many major cities construct MRT or subway to let the city's traffic more convenient so that their citizens may decide to replace their cars with the public transportation. In this way, we may foresee that the amount of cars will reduce and be lower than nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...eplacement is vehicle which can contain much people such as buses but can be more ef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7371010796 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.800179229 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2272727273 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177142347215 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555391869045 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807440850066 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131474759238 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529002882204 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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