Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
disagree with the statement that in twenty years there will be fewer cars than today. I believe cars' use will increase in the future. The world is urbanizing, which will associate with more car use. Technology will make cars more attainable, and the innovations in vehicles will keep the demand for vehicles high.
First, the world is going towards more urbanization. Most companies build their campuses away from cities' centers because it is cheaper. As a result, people have to drive more to reach their workplace. The only convenient way to reach their destination daily is private cars. For instance, my husband's company decided to move its location to an urban area. This policy will help the company to decrease the high rental cost in the hub of the city. He usually uses the train to reach the old company site. Now he has to buy a car as the train does not reach that far.
Secondly, the advancement in the cars' industry will lead to more car manufacture. The high production of vehicles will lower their prices. More cars with low rates will keep the demand for automobiles pretty high.
For instance, when we follow the data related to car sales in the last 20 years. We can see an increase in sales and production. When we apply this in the next 20 years, we can easily predict that this trend will keep going up.
Finally, significant innovations in the car industry managed to keep people interested in cars. Every year there are many features added to the new models. These new features were an excellent technique to elevate the curve in the car's sales. For example, I was satisfied with my old car until I watched this ad about a new model. The new model comes with a technology package. Although most of these features were not essential, I decided to exchange my old car with the new one. I felt it would be cool to have that advancement in my vehicle.
In conclusion, I believe that cars will be more soon as the importance of the vehicle is growing every year due to their indispensable role in our daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52127659574 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45165454429 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6171141366 48.9658058833 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.7142857143 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245604479624 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787729556441 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105182188857 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140299951853 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121747043126 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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