do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
First, Friendship is graded by quality, not by the numbers. We can have just one ot two good friends and feel completely satisfied. On the other hand, we can have tons of useless, unsupportive and unloyal friends and feel entirely alone. Friends have roles in our life need to be fullfiled. If we do not have a mutual balanced relationship with them, so there is no reason to waste our precious time in this kind of relationship. For example, last year, I had major problem with my husband, I felt very lost and was crying non-stop. Therefore I called my relatively new friend to comfort me in this hard situation. But she was not supportive at all as she did not show any sympathy, or offered any guidance on how to solve my problem. I felt so lonely, and I decided to end our friendship.
Secondly, Our old friends are more trusted than new people. Trust is really important factor as we get really engaged with our friends. We invite them to come over. Also, we share with them many personal details about our family and work. If they are not trusted enough, we will be completely unsafe around them. For example, I had a work situation last month, I had to leave my son with my friend for a few hours. When I decided which one I could trust to accompany my son, I chose the oldest friend I know, because I know her in and out for a long time. My long experience with her validated my decision.
Finally, making new friends is a long process it needs alot of time and energy. We need at least couple of yeas to call a new person a friend.
Once we accomplish that, we should maintain this relation. We need to preserve what we achieved with our old friends and build on this bond that we created with them.
In conclusion, I believe that we all should maintain our link with our old friends instead of making new friends. This will make our life more efficient and minimize the time and the enegy . Also, it will ensure good quality of friends and make us feel safer among them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41032608696 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41778770221 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9463461635 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.625 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95833333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118398667779 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039968935663 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386522153308 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673306885269 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410751220001 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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